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	<title>Comments on: Is Universe Stargate&#039;s version of Star Trek:Voyager? &#124; eoghann.com</title>
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		<title>By: degrasinge zente</title>
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		<dc:creator>degrasinge zente</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Dec 2010 00:10:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That is quite simply, false. New matter would be made of atoms, which are made of protons (not positrons), neutrons and electrons. Pair production produces an electron (negative spin) and a positron (antimatter version of an electron, but wiith positive spin) that almost immediately fuse again and cancel each other out. So please explain...why does your electron not merge again with its positron? And where do your new protons (not positrons) and neutrons happen to come from?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That is quite simply, false. New matter would be made of atoms, which are made of protons (not positrons), neutrons and electrons. Pair production produces an electron (negative spin) and a positron (antimatter version of an electron, but wiith positive spin) that almost immediately fuse again and cancel each other out. So please explain&#8230;why does your electron not merge again with its positron? And where do your new protons (not positrons) and neutrons happen to come from?</p>
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		<title>By: danne chan</title>
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		<dc:creator>danne chan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Dec 2010 18:08:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Workers were united in resenting the industrial system, but they were divided by ethnic and racial &lt;b&gt;antagonisms&lt;/b&gt;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Workers were united in resenting the industrial system, but they were divided by ethnic and racial <b>antagonisms</b>.</p>
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		<title>By: alvorakege woodfresh</title>
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		<dc:creator>alvorakege woodfresh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Dec 2010 04:11:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The antagonist is by far one of the most important characters in a story. If his actions are forced or his character undeveloped, the whole piece can fall flat. To give depth and meaning to your villain, you&#039;re going to what to rethink his character a little bit to find the reasons behind his actions. There a couple of resources you can look at for examples of characters and character traits that could lead him to a life of evil or crime.

The Writer&#039;s Guide to Character Traits by Linda N. Edelstein is a great book written by a psychologist. It discusses influences on a person&#039;s character and lists possible explanations and motives for behavior. It could be helpful. Another consider is 45 Master Characters by Victoria Lynn Schmidt. This book analyzes classic archetypes from Greek myth that have appeared in various incarnations throughout literary history. It explains the chief motivations of each archetypes and gives examples of them in books and film. You might be able to incorporate some of the traits from these archetypes to craft a better character. 

From what it sounds like, your villain is a bit flat, not rounded, and thus your story has become more plot-driven than it should be. The best stories are those where the characters drive the action of the novel. Why don&#039;t you try letting your villain do what he wants instead of forcing him to follow your preconceived notions on the plot? If he just sits on his hands or goes off and does his own thing without bothering with the hero, than he&#039;s not the real villain of your piece. You might want to consider a new character. And remember, in fantasy we tend to see villains who are purely and irredeemably evil. But sometimes the most intriguing conflicts come between two characters who aren&#039;t evil, they&#039;re just different. Good versus good can be more conflicted and grittier than good versus evil. Your villain might even believe that the hero is the evil one, and thus must be stopped. 

You also might find that your story doesn&#039;t have a clear antagonist. Most do, but some are driven purely by the actions of the characters. Sometimes the characters act for good, sometimes for evil. Look at novels like George R.R. Martin&#039;s Game of Thrones. His book is filled with one of the largest casts in any fantasy. There are some unlikeable characters, particularly in the first book. But as the series progresses and more of these characters are given a chance to narrate the story and tell things from their perspective, the reader begins to realize that none of them are really good or evil. They&#039;re simply people. And that&#039;s why the story is effective. Hope that helps!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The antagonist is by far one of the most important characters in a story. If his actions are forced or his character undeveloped, the whole piece can fall flat. To give depth and meaning to your villain, you&#039;re going to what to rethink his character a little bit to find the reasons behind his actions. There a couple of resources you can look at for examples of characters and character traits that could lead him to a life of evil or crime.</p>
<p>The Writer&#039;s Guide to Character Traits by Linda N. Edelstein is a great book written by a psychologist. It discusses influences on a person&#039;s character and lists possible explanations and motives for behavior. It could be helpful. Another consider is 45 Master Characters by Victoria Lynn Schmidt. This book analyzes classic archetypes from Greek myth that have appeared in various incarnations throughout literary history. It explains the chief motivations of each archetypes and gives examples of them in books and film. You might be able to incorporate some of the traits from these archetypes to craft a better character. </p>
<p>From what it sounds like, your villain is a bit flat, not rounded, and thus your story has become more plot-driven than it should be. The best stories are those where the characters drive the action of the novel. Why don&#039;t you try letting your villain do what he wants instead of forcing him to follow your preconceived notions on the plot? If he just sits on his hands or goes off and does his own thing without bothering with the hero, than he&#039;s not the real villain of your piece. You might want to consider a new character. And remember, in fantasy we tend to see villains who are purely and irredeemably evil. But sometimes the most intriguing conflicts come between two characters who aren&#039;t evil, they&#039;re just different. Good versus good can be more conflicted and grittier than good versus evil. Your villain might even believe that the hero is the evil one, and thus must be stopped. </p>
<p>You also might find that your story doesn&#039;t have a clear antagonist. Most do, but some are driven purely by the actions of the characters. Sometimes the characters act for good, sometimes for evil. Look at novels like George R.R. Martin&#039;s Game of Thrones. His book is filled with one of the largest casts in any fantasy. There are some unlikeable characters, particularly in the first book. But as the series progresses and more of these characters are given a chance to narrate the story and tell things from their perspective, the reader begins to realize that none of them are really good or evil. They&#039;re simply people. And that&#039;s why the story is effective. Hope that helps!</p>
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		<title>By: hayatterof</title>
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		<dc:creator>hayatterof</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Nov 2010 23:24:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What&#039;s the music in this video?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What&#8217;s the music in this video?</p>
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		<title>By: dodgette</title>
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		<dc:creator>dodgette</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Nov 2010 21:50:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Some of the best recent empirical work in political science has shown that most Americans attempt to vote in accordance with their economic interests, rather than by the dictates of ephemeral antagonisms over God, gays, or guns. Unfortunately, economic  improvements for the vast majority of Americans over the past three decades have been so marginal that they are easily overshadowed by cynical manipulations of the political business cycle, the timing of economic expansions with election years, and by the strange fact that lower-income voters are more sensitive, in terms of voting behavior, to income growth among the wealthy than they are to their own economic well-being.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Some of the best recent empirical work in political science has shown that most Americans attempt to vote in accordance with their economic interests, rather than by the dictates of ephemeral antagonisms over God, gays, or guns. Unfortunately, economic  improvements for the vast majority of Americans over the past three decades have been so marginal that they are easily overshadowed by cynical manipulations of the political business cycle, the timing of economic expansions with election years, and by the strange fact that lower-income voters are more sensitive, in terms of voting behavior, to income growth among the wealthy than they are to their own economic well-being.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: saffara</title>
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		<dc:creator>saffara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Nov 2010 05:42:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;why can&#039;t we get health insurance?&quot; Dunyamiz boylesine nazik bir yer degil maalesef.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;why can&#8217;t we get health insurance?&#8221; Dunyamiz boylesine nazik bir yer degil maalesef.</p>
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		<title>By: ger knis</title>
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		<dc:creator>ger knis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Nov 2010 20:27:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There is a hint of truth here:  I sincerely believe that the &quot;ruling class&quot; is happy when the rest of us fight amongst ourselves.

However, there is no way on earth that Harry Reid or Chuck Schumer will ever be &quot;the same&quot; as Jim DeMint; that Eric Cantor will be confused with Nancy Pelosi; or that Sean Hannity and Keith Olberman would have a thimbleful of the same agenda.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is a hint of truth here:  I sincerely believe that the &quot;ruling class&quot; is happy when the rest of us fight amongst ourselves.</p>
<p>However, there is no way on earth that Harry Reid or Chuck Schumer will ever be &quot;the same&quot; as Jim DeMint; that Eric Cantor will be confused with Nancy Pelosi; or that Sean Hannity and Keith Olberman would have a thimbleful of the same agenda.</p>
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		<title>By: kler keen</title>
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		<dc:creator>kler keen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Nov 2010 19:32:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>UK is freakin&#039; liberal and gay, regardless parties and politics</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>UK is freakin&#039; liberal and gay, regardless parties and politics</p>
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		<title>By: jamssia nobu</title>
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		<dc:creator>jamssia nobu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 12 Nov 2010 15:45:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hes a stalker that all i know ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hes a stalker that all i know <img src='http://www.scifi-fan.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: kal fadzica</title>
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		<dc:creator>kal fadzica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Nov 2010 20:36:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am really considering having a superhero/&lt;b&gt;villain&lt;/b&gt;  wedding I want Victor Von Doom to marry me #youarestillageekwhen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am really considering having a superhero/<b>villain</b>  wedding I want Victor Von Doom to marry me #youarestillageekwhen</p>
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